[請益] 求職應問自傳求批

作者: gd03 (閒散懶人)   2016-06-20 23:18:49
第一次寫英文自傳,想請教各位先進文法或語意上有沒有什麼問題。
第一段主要是想點出主要的專長在哪。
第二及第三段則是描述自己的經驗。
第四段做個總結。
I am writing to introduce myself and inquire about
the opening of firmware and software engineer.
I have rich experience in firmware and application develop.
With more than 3 years, I develop and maintain payment devices.
I develop the firmware code with C programming language and
desktop application
with VB6.
I have experience in the firmware and driver develop like
UART, USB, SPI, I2C, interrupt, secure sensors and so on.
The develop and debug tool like JTAG, oscilloscope, logic analyzers,
signal monitor tool is common for me.
I also have the ability to read circuit diagram and
microcontroller specification. Hence, I can communicate with
hardware RD well and fix any unexpected issues in target board.
I’m able to develop device's application and desktop software.
I develop the device’s application to comply with
the EMV contactless specification.
For getting the VISA payWave contactless certification,
I develop the device's application and write test software on desktop.
I go to South Korea on business and
get the payWave certification in test lab.
I also conform the EMV contact Lv1 specification and
get certification in FIME laboratory.
I have confidence about communication skill with English.
Moreover, I can smoothly communicate with software RD.
I also know about the thinking difference between
the firmware and software develop.
I believe I can do the firmware and software job well.
I believe I am a great candidate for this job.
作者: mimi0254didi (餅乾)   2016-06-21 14:00:00
太多中式英文 我看第一段而已 develop 是動詞你當名詞用,建議你 去linkedin 看同專業的人 怎麼打CV你也可以看到 他們的自我推薦信(某些會貼)driver develop => in the development of .....請人家幫你改吧 最快了 有翻譯板 小錢而已而且全都是 簡單句 I開頭太多了

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