用那台伴你成長的腳踏車

作者: lin91223 (starbutterfly)   2020-06-16 17:19:49
When I taught you
at eight to ride
a bicycle, loping along
beside you
as you wobbled away
on two round wheels,
my own mouth rounding
in surprise when you pulled
ahead down the curved
path of the park,
I kept waiting
for the thud
of your crash as I
sprinted to catch up,
while you grew
smaller, more breakable
with distance,
pumping, pumping
for your life, screaming
with laughter,
the hair flapping
behind you like a
handkerchief waving
goodbye.
昨天小雪貼ㄉ那個害阿肥想到
有人知道這個ㄇ
作者: TzuyuChou117   2020-06-16 17:21:00
wobble跟pump用得真不錯
作者: trolkin (邊緣人003)   2020-06-16 17:22:00
When I am down and oh my soul so weary
作者: celtics1997 (山東之龍-禁邪賽鴿)   2020-06-16 17:22:00
Tqis ls an penis ,
作者: lin91223 (starbutterfly)   2020-06-16 17:23:00
怎麼縮ㄚ
作者: TzuyuChou117   2020-06-16 17:24:00
有那種一開始很蹣跚笨拙 到小屁孩想暴衝的動態感
作者: lin91223 (starbutterfly)   2020-06-16 17:26:00
我是覺得breakable讓我有你怎麼會出現在這裡的感覺 但後來覺ㄉ其實很搭
作者: TzuyuChou117   2020-06-16 17:26:00
可可
作者: lin91223 (starbutterfly)   2020-06-16 17:28:00
我覺得整ㄍ就是很有畫面感 而且很好懂
作者: TzuyuChou117   2020-06-16 17:29:00
好媽媽的畫面
作者: lin91223 (starbutterfly)   2020-06-16 17:31:00
為什麼不是把拔 是因為揮手帕嗎揮手帕好像是媽媽才會想到ㄉ畫面
作者: TzuyuChou117   2020-06-16 17:33:00
如果是爸爸應該會說「Yooooo niiice son u finallylearn to ride this mofo」然後跟兒子一起暴衝
作者: lin91223 (starbutterfly)   2020-06-16 17:33:00
好壞ㄛ
作者: TzuyuChou117   2020-06-16 17:35:00
:))

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