When editing the script, I realized that the relationship among the characters
is really complicated! Konstantin loves Nina, Nina loves Trigorin, Trigorin
loved Nina once then abandons her, Arkadina loves Trigorin as well. Masha loves
Konstantin, Mishkin loves Masha.
And there's something else:
Polina likes Dorn.
I'm not certain about this yet, but it seems like this. Have you guys noticed
this? I'd like to know if this is not the case...
And I found that it's not as easy as I thought to cut the script to half its
size. Anyway, I'll try my best.
Playwright of act I. Jasmine :)

I agree. That's why I decided to eliminate less.

Don't forget Shamrev (presumably) loves Polina

that's his wife! course he loves her!

Aja...the relationship is complicated....

Actually, I meant to ask: is the relationshipbetween Dorn and Polina important? otherwise Iwant to cut it. What's ur opinion?

cut; but i think the fact that dorn was oncemay be importantThanks Jasmine for the script. I think I will gofor a more colloquial language. Any thoughts gals?

More colloquil? OK! so I need to revise Act I?

no I got it ^^

thanks!