1. 一個成功的企業不應該把獲利當作最主要的目標
A successful business should not view
profits as its major goal.
2. 它應該負起社會責任，以增進大眾福祉。
It should take social responsibilities
to promote/improve the public welfare.
作者:
r357687 (哈囉)
2015-02-02 14:36:00take responsibility for society 這樣可以嗎QQ
enhance the benefit of people?
作者: grahamwu 2015-02-02 15:03:00
for sosiety 空泛點 至少扣0.5分 但看整體分數可能沒差
作者: winjun (問將) 2015-02-02 15:08:00
這是英文教超棒的普雷老師耶!!
作者:
bbaacc (Simaigre)
2015-02-02 15:08:00benefit是利益，跟福祉有差 我寫well being。
作者: grahamwu 2015-02-02 15:16:00
抱歉誤看 2F的寫這樣應該過關
作者:
jacko0107 (jacklantern)
2015-02-02 15:18:00爽啦 只敢寫business 好險對
作者: grahamwu 2015-02-02 15:19:00
3樓的若加public 會更好 "benifit" of all 用字OK
A successful enterprise shouldn't consider gaining profits the main purpose.
作者: grahamwu 2015-02-02 16:06:00
main target可
第二寫increase the social happiness……
作者: grahamwu 2015-02-02 17:06:00
set as 句意不通
作者:
chlechin (chlechin)
2015-02-02 17:58:00一模一樣給推