Re: [請益] 托福口說求救

作者: Mydick ( 醉拳甘Mydick)   2016-06-29 04:05:03
※ 引述《a159ab159 (餅乾 )》之銘言:
: 各位大大好!
: 想請教口說的一些問題
: 1.考試的時候感覺主要的內容都有講到,也盡量不要停,也沒有說想不到要說什麼,
: 可是出來的分數卻還是只有17~18分
: 2. 目前也有找人一起練習,但雙方口說分數好像沒有太大的差異(會不會是兩個人程度都不
: 好的關係?)
: 3. 想知道怎樣的標準可以達到20分以上
: 20分以上口說聽起來要符合哪些標準、該怎麼加強,那些點需要注意
: 非常感謝各位大大寶貴的意見
本魯小小鄉民, 發個純粹幫忙無廣告訊息文 & 先感謝專家老師們指教,會努力再學習改進
用文字描述口說答案/標準, 我的才華有限(真的不會上色,) 謹貼兩個示範音檔:
Task1 What will you do when you have a lot of assingments to do?
Task1 Your friend is about to drop out from school; what is your advice?
http://vocaroo.com/i/s16WziwyFENR
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0U2ue1kZY9y
小分析
1.如果幾次都未達20分, 我推測可能是:
(1) 以中文發聲方式來講英文, 阿逗仔考官不容易理解。
解決方案 Rachel's English: https://www.youtube.com/user/rachelsenglish
這位YoutTube上有名的老師, 擅長用剖面圖和手指來示意各發聲器官的相對位置。
認真看下來, 你會發現英文跟中文發聲方式差得很遠, 萬萬不能用明朝的劍去斬清朝的官
(2) 說話重音和節奏是母語國台語的習慣, 阿逗仔考官抓不到一句話該有的重音
(例如:動詞加重/ 重點名詞加重等)這個很難克服, 版上示範得很好的老師是SK2的David,
他分享的Dropbox音檔重音都很正確明晰, 是TOEFL入門學生極有價值的參考範例。
(3) 另外也可以參考 Notefull Toefl 著名的教學影片,
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6434B98632F06DB0
Joseph老師說話慢慢穩穩的, 眾多YouTube示範影片中最好模仿(風險就是模板太多人用)
發聲跟重音非強項的人最好不要卯起來講快, 旁人聽錄音不知道在公沙小多半是太快了orz
在上面幾樓我還有一篇講句子意思關聯性的文 &示範音檔, 風向被帶歪了(?)
在這裡撈起來也供參考 http://vocaroo.com/i/s1nwJDzqSXLe
我回答的時候會努力做到上面提的標準, 標準(3)我平常語速偏快做得也不盡完善,
希望有幫到點忙, 裨益版上一樣在跟口說奮戰的鄉民。
作者: red0423 (JE甫)   2016-06-29 09:26:00
謝謝分享
作者: joycechiau (joycechiau)   2016-06-29 10:25:00
推熱心~
作者: fulgent (hermeneutic)   2016-06-29 11:42:00
因應 lasaman 的要求(「若有逐字稿更好」),我幫各位原樣聽寫 M 大口說 response 的逐字稿-Task 1: What will you do when you have a lot ofassignments to do?My answer: When I have a lot of assignments to do,the first action I usually take is to prioritize mytasks. By "prioritizing," I mean I'd determine what'surgent and what to put on the back burner. Forexample, I'll surely start with those projects as isthey're about to due, and let these take up my timefirst. Secondly, I'll try to stay alone before I feellike I'm done with the pressure. This not only helpsme put responsibility over social life, but alsohelps me focus. An example could be like signing outfrom all social media such as the Twitter or theFacebook, or that all calls on my phone turned intothe voicemail. That way, I have a better chance tofocus and finish the assignment on time.Task 1, the question: Your friend is consideringdropping out from school-what is your advice?My answer: I'll say, "Go ahead!" But by telling he orshe to do such a thing, I mean a heart knows what aheart wants, right? So we gotta stay loyal to ourtrue feelings. If dropping out is what feels rightjust at this moment, just do it. Hit the pausebutton, and reconsider the pathway to the future.Some American college students or graduates take agap year as a way to figure out what's next, so whynot? But I'll still consider and warn this friend ofmine that he or she should take full responsibilityfor this important decision. For example, if this isgonna disappoint the parents or friends, face it. Andif this means the beginning of adult life, he or shehas to manage to find a job and be independentfinancially and all.以上僅忠實還原;文法、句構是否要精修就交給 M 大決定,我只明確指出一點:due 沒有動詞用法,所以 "about todue" 是不對的。M 大的回應內容很切題,值得各位學習-亮點很多,好比 put sth on the back burner 這個慣用語就用得很精準、漂亮;"a heart knows what a heart wants"是很有趣的表達法,令人想起 Selena Gomez 的歌 "TheHeart Wants What It Wants"。Rachel 的頻道確實不錯-她和英國的 Minoo 一起錄製的「美式 vs. 英式發音」影片蠻有趣的。
作者: lasaman (擁抱初衷的心)   2016-07-04 07:22:00
謝謝Fulgent大大的用心

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