#我讓ChapGPT寫了一個範文
#猜猜看它能獲得幾分
大家好，我是Chris
今天想跟大家聊聊「完美的單字文法」會不會在托福裡拿高分？
最近我們練了一篇學術討論寫作，題目是： If you had to choose between prioritizi
ng economic growth or protecting the environment, which one would you choose?
Why?
於是，Chris請ChatGPT用大約150個字為一個段落的指令，回答此篇題目。我們來看ChatG
PT在這道題目裡面提供的範文：
I strongly advocate for prioritizing the environment over economic growth.
While economic development is undoubtedly important for improving lives, it s
hould not come at the expense of our planet's well-being. We must recognize th
at we only have one Earth, and its preservation is crucial for our own surviva
l and that of future generations. By shifting towards sustainable practices, s
uch as investing in renewable energy and embracing eco-friendly technologies,
we can strike a harmonious balance between economic progress and environmental
protection. Moreover, prioritizing the environment can lead to numerous long-
term benefits, including the development of innovative solutions, and the over
all improvement of public health. It is our responsibility to ensure that our
economic activities align with sustainable principles, so that we can build a
prosperous future.
讀完之後，我們可以觀察到ChatGPT的句子通順，文法完美 (廢話)，並且我們也能從中學
到滿多可以學習的用法：
at the expense of (以......為代價)
strike a harmonious balance（取得和諧的平衡）
sustainable practices（可持續的做法）
renewable energy（可再生能源）
lead to numerous long-term benefits (帶來長期的效益)
這些字串可以幫助同學擴展該主題的詞彙。
然而，當我把這篇文章，以托福的評分標準，請它去評分，它這樣說：
The paraphraph would likely receive a score of 3 or 3.5 on the TOEFL scoring s
cale, which ranges from 1 to 5. The paragraph effectively presents a clear sta
nce and rationale for prioritizing the environment over economic growth. It in
troduces the concept of sustainable practices as a solution to balancing econo
mic progress and environmental protection. However, the paragraph lacks specif
ic examples or evidence to support its arguments and demonstrate a deeper unde
rstanding of the topic. The inclusion of concrete examples would enhance the p
aragraph's development by providing tangible illustrations of successful susta
inable practices or real-world situations. This would bolster the overall cohe
rence and persuasiveness of the response.
你會發現讀完後，其實還是不太了解擬答中，renewable energy, eco-friendly technol
ogies 可能會是什麼？具體而言要怎麼達到long-term benefits呢？這樣的過程解釋不清
楚，而且「抽象概念」太多，會使得同學沒辦法滿足在ETS官方說法中 "Development", "
Examplification"的評分標準，果然它只能獲得3分~3.5分。
因此，Chris 幫大家總結ChatGPT使用的幾個面向：
1. 能擴展此主題的詞彙
2. 修正文法句構是否通順
3. 檢查單字與字串的用法
要更進一步在托福裡的"Development", "Examplification" 可能就需要平常同學在生活
中仰賴「具體化」的寫作能力，或是和ChapGPT一起腦力激盪，如此一來就能提供你一些
在托福裡面可以使用的idea！希望今天的分享可以破解大家追求單字、文法完美的寫作迷
思！
Chris
Until then
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