大家好
我是國小一年級生的媽媽, 最近國小舉行英文朗讀比賽(故事長度3分鐘內),
我自己寫了一個小故事(約250個英文單字以內),
雖然找書局的英文故事書, 文法用字才會是正確的,
但我想試試看自己來, 本身英文不是很好,
想問說
1.有甚麼版或是網頁有真人英文文法及用字校正呢?(希望可以是免費的)
2.若是要收費, 多少費用合理呢?
再麻煩大家撥空回答!
謝謝!
以下為故事內容
Collie puppy
Collie is a puppy lived in the farm.
He likes to play in the field and running in the meadow..
Every morning, the rooster wakes the farmer and animals up,
and the hens lay eggs.
Collie has seen the farmer collected the wool from sheep.
Collie wonders what works can I do in the farm.
He asks a terrier in the farm names Mini.
“I catch mice at the barn.
These mice and rats damage the farmer's grain.
Maybe you can try to catch mice.” Mini says.
Collie sniffs around the barn and found a rat!
He is after the rat and almost on it.
The rat is passing under the cabinet.
Collie is too big to pass under the cabinet.
He is not so good at mousing.
Collie tries mousing outside the barn and sees a Beagle hunting in the field.
The beagle's fur is suite for hiding in the bushes
but Collie's long fur is stuck in the bush.
One day, the farmer takes Collie to the meadow.
The sheep are grazing.
Collie is very excited and running around the sheep
that makes the sheep come together in a flock.
The farmer says “lie down” to make Collie slow down.
The black and white fur of Collie is flowing on the air,
shining in the meadow .
Collie feels confident and happy.
He wants to learn more skills.
Collie thinks "this is the best work I can do!".