[創作] Raining Day Child

作者: korn31910 (ç¾…æ‹”)   2019-03-01 14:41:05
When I saw the child under no shelter
In the heavy rain
I realized that child was me long time ago
With no fear of the look
Bred by water, and would grow up
And put you in rain, dropping
With passing passion inside
作者: sylviaplath (hate summer)   2019-03-01 16:41:00
like the theme, fix some words and cadence wouldbe perfect!
作者: korn31910 (ç¾…æ‹”)   2019-03-01 17:00:00
Thank you Sylvia! :)

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