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然後題目如下
The rich are getting richer while the poor are getting poorer. Inequality is
the most urgent problem facing humanity today. What are the causes of income
inequality, and what solutions do you recommend? Please write in at least 200
words (3 paragraphs) a well organized essay to express your opinion
我自己寫income inequality 的原因來自family condition
但幫我改的人說我這樣寫的方向不對
我上網查了一下他的定義
Income inequality refers to the extent to which income is distributed in an
uneven manner among a population.
我還是覺得會原因是來自個人家庭背景，資源豐富等等，另外我寫的solution是
self-reflection(找出有無可改進之處)，但這樣寫也被講寫錯方向了QQ
想請教寫family condition是錯的嗎? 如果這個方向不對應該往甚麼方向好 謝謝
(寫essay 要寫對方向好難..)