大家好
最近在準備應徵加拿大打工度假的工作
履歷已經準備好了
但第一次寫求職e-mail
不知這樣是否妥當
再請各位先進幫忙過目與指正一下
Dear sir
My name is oo
I am writing to apply as a oo position which has been advertis
ed on oo webside.
About me
． Loving travel and have experience of working holiday in Japan.
． Have some experiences of being a guest service staff and tanslator.
． Native Chinese speaker
and be able to speaking Japanese,English and Taiwanese.
． Have positive attitude for doing tour guide,
hense I find myself quite be capable of doing this job.
More importantly, I am
．Hardworking
．A fast learner
．Empathetic
．Dedicated team member
．Have sence of humor
I have been dreaming of this job for years,
and therefore i applied a working holiday visa in Canada.
My application to work in Canada has been approved now, and my job in Japan wi
ll end in late August,
I am wondering if I can working in your company from September or November unt
il the end of winter season.
Thanks to taking time to consider my application
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
sincerely
oo

文法蠻多錯誤的，但我不知道此公司在不在意這件事情，也許你其他的經驗對他們來說比較重要。看得出你很想要這份工作，建議你花錢去譯者板找專業譯者幫你修。

了解 謝謝你告訴我

這種形式好像不常見。你可以查查 cover letter/motivation letter 的範本模仿看看，然後做一份 resume/CV，附檔在信件裡面。內容的話，建議描述自己時可以多加一些證據或數字。例如你說自己學得很快，就可以舉過去經驗佐證例如幾個月內從不會寫程式到參與開發一個專案。宣稱自己能說哪些語言，就附上考試成績或者描述曾用那些語言進行的事也好（例如當過展場翻譯之類）。還有盡量要把你的特質連結到你要申請的職位，不是只舉一些套到什麼職位都適合的好員工特質。例如工作認真就沒什麼必要講，畢竟應該沒有應徵者會說自己不認真，除非你可以舉出一些經驗來說明你比一般人認真（自主進修之類的）。我個人認為以上原則基本達到後才要考慮英文問題，可以像一樓說的付費請專業的修。另外看到好幾個基本文法和拼字這種用免費軟體（如 Grammarly 免費版）就可以抓出來的錯，自己先多檢查幾次，不然付錢請人幫挑這個好像有點浪費錢 XD

謝謝回應 我後來請朋友幫忙了果然還是要打點底子啊