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※ 引述《samok (記者只會抄公社低卡記錄7)》之銘言：
: ※ 引述《samok (記者只會抄公社低卡記錄7)》之銘言：
: : 學姊寫的作文 待會幫他改一下
: : Dear John
: : How's everything going on? I want to tell you a great news that I was
: How's everything going?/ What's going on?
: : admitted to a language school in Los Angeles. I will study there next month.
: admitted在這邊比較像是申請還沒過關的感覺，如果兩句寫在一起會比較好
: EX:I'm going to study in a language school in Los Angeles in next month.
: : May you help me rent a house in advance? I promise to treat you to a fantastic
: 關係比較熟用Could 就可以了 還有記得要加to
: (may/could 原型 但help後面+to V是幫...的意思)
: Could you help me to rent a house there in advance?
: (要不要預先我這邊感覺不出來 我是不會寫in advance啦 但沒什麼問題我就先留著)
: : meal as a fairing. I hope you can seek a house corresponding to followings:
: 我覺得不用to
: 這句怪怪的 我會寫 In return, I promise I will treat you a big meal.
: 然後我會擺最後
: I hope you can find a house by those followings.
: 英文的冒號(colon)千萬別亂用 乖乖點句點就好
: : First, the size of house doesn't matter, but the location is close to UCLA.
: has to be
: : Second, the area nearby is good public transport. Third, it is located in a
: Second, the area has good public transport network.
: : quieter area. Fourth, the room is clean and yet it concludes bed, desk,
: 你被騙了 用quiet就可以了
: conclude=結論 include=包括 家具這個名詞沒寫到 furniture(注意不可數)
: 我會寫the room is tidy and it includes some furniture such as bed, desk,
: and air-conditioner.
: : air-conditioner. Finally, it might be better for the neighbor being student
: 我會寫If the neighbors were all students instead of Chinese would be better
: for me.
: : instead of chinese. Besides, the rent must be reasonable. Please email
: Chinese大寫 information加個the
: Finally 最好擺最後，所以besides可以跟finally對調順序
: : information about the house to me as soon as possible. Thank you very much.
: In return, I promise I will treat you a big meal.Thank you very much.
: : Jenny
: 寫信的話最好加一句Sincerely,
: PS: 我差點改linguistic school
: https://www.hopenglish.com/why-is-there-a-noun-before-a-noun