[履歷] 新鮮人英文求職信求批

作者: dragon0518 (Dragon)   2016-12-26 15:42:08
個人學經歷背景: 成大企管碩士
欲應徵之職務: Garena儲備幹部計畫
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Dear Hiring Manager,
My name is ooo and ooo is my nickname. I earned my master degree
in business administration from National Cheng Kung University in 2016.
Garena is famous for games. However, the most attractive to me is your vision
and goal. Garena not only wants to be a game provider but also wants to be a
consumer internet platform provider. Just like your slogan “connecting the
dots”. I always would like to be a “dot” to connect each person and make
this world better together. The most important is I am so passionate about
the internet and the electronic commerce. That is why I am interested in this
program.
In 2015, I joined (A company) during the summer vacation, the company which is
running the most popular SMS app in Taiwan. In the two months, I was a member
of the PR team. I assisted in holding the press conference, writing the press
releases, and I had been interviewed by TV news for three times. I learned
how to interact with the journalist and knew how to attract media’s
attention. Moreover, I acted as the contact window for a crossover PR event.
To be a good project owner, I had a responsibility to contact PR agency and
our partner simultaneously to discuss and confirm every detail thing, even
the color of microphone brand. In this project, I planned, developed and
implemented it with my colleagues’ assistance. I learned how to make
decisions quickly but carefully. I also found the importance of teamwork, so
I enhance my interpersonal and organizational skills from this project. To
sum up, I not only made a lot of friends in this 8 weeks, but also recognized
how to work effectively and efficiently in an internet company.
Two years ago, I interned as a marketing assistant at (B company). During the year.
I had been working closely with senior marketing executives on several new
product promotions, planning the press conference, researching the market
trend and dealing with consumer feedback. In addition, I had a chance to
learn what internet marketing is and how to promote the products through the
internet. What impressed me the most was I made a slogan for a product and it
was used on every poster and catalog. Through this internship, I have
developed analytical skill and honed my knowledge of marketing and
communication skill.
I am an enthusiastic, pleasant and open-minded person. Therefore, my friends
usually described me as a good team player. I believe that teamwork is always
better than individual. And the reason I got good GPA is I am a quick
learner, especially the thing about computer and the internet. Given my
experience and personality, I think I am a strong candidate. I look forward
to joining and contributing to your firm.
A copy of my resume is enclosed for your reference. I would appreciate an
opportunity to discuss my qualifications at your earliest convenience. I can
be reached at 0912-345678 or via email at [email protected]/*
作者: dosandonts (Catalano is A+)   2016-12-26 17:34:00
Could you please write down the "specific" result?for example, how many public are attracted by youor what kine of achievement do you fulfill?the above listed is like a conversation instead ofa outstanding introduction
作者: alice78226 (紫)   2016-12-26 18:56:00
看的出來很努力準備內容,但求職信來講太長了,基本上以三段限,第一段你是透過甚麼管道知道這個職缺的信息應徵的動機是甚麼,然後你有甚麼能力足以勝任(用關鍵字,第二段再針對第一段提到的能力做進一步詳述,第三段則可著重在軟性技能描述。
作者: DFIGHT (低調好人)   2016-12-26 20:03:00
你一天用四成電,愛瘋稱不了的,有充電的我看第一段就不想看了,好長,拜託你早點進入正題你把第一段閃了,倒數第二段拿去當開頭
作者: fishinthesky (在空中的魚)   2016-12-26 20:38:00
你的英文有待加強
作者: xiangming (鄉民)   2016-12-26 22:32:00
文法不好盡量用條列式寫重點 不然一看就錯一堆...
作者: mimi0254didi (餅乾)   2016-12-26 22:51:00
wants 重複兩次可拿掉後方的the most important is I 文法錯 重寫文法有些問題 找個native 幫你看 我懶得看了
作者: a3358826 (馬蓋先)   2016-12-27 08:35:00
文法幾乎每句都有點問題 最好上網找範例修改比較好不然與其一下被人看出缺點 不如不要附
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