※ 引述《prompter (Qu)》之銘言：
: 這是我看完前三章的一些修改建議
: 請再給我一點時間看完後面章節
: This is some of the proposed changes and suggestions before chapeter 3.
: Please give me a some time to read the following chapters.
: 想寫出我中文的意思
: 但英文文法似乎有點混亂
: 不曉得可以怎麼修?
: 希望有高手可以幫忙QQ
這是我看完前三章的一些修改建議
請再給我一點時間看完後面章節
This is some of the proposed changes and suggestions before chapeter 3.
Please give me a some time to read the following chapters.
建議
Here's attached with a few advices after l finished the previous chapters 1-3.
I need more time to go through the rest.