這是我參考網路別人的寫法自己整理重寫的，請問文法上面有錯誤嗎？
黃色部分是我覺得比較有可能錯的，空格是用來放名詞子句的
還請大家幫忙檢查一下～謝謝
The reading passage and the speaker both discuss the topic of _____.
However, the speaker disagrees with the ideas in the reading passage.
He thinks that _____ in the reading passage is questionable and offers
several reasons to oppose the article.
First of all, the reading passage mentions that _____, and therefore _____.
But the speaker says that _____. Thus, the speaker believes _____.
The second reason which the lecturer refers to a disproof is that _____.
Although the article states _____, he notes that _____.
Hence, the lecturer concludes that _____.
Finally, the author of reading passage claims that _____, whereas
the orator points out that _____. As a result, the orator considers that _____,
and that contradicts what the reading passage indicates.