[請益] 因為要考研究所,自己英文弱,求幫修改

作者: mm111113 (ntntc)   2014-10-07 20:48:26
學生xxx,生長於南投縣,畢業於屏東科大學,家庭成員有爸爸、媽媽,還有二位弟弟
。爸爸任職彰化縣慈愛教養院為身心障礙者職業重建個案管理員,媽媽為美髮師。
因為喜歡服務,所以選擇社會工作。在大三實習期間,接觸到身心障礙者與早期療育的孩
童,在服務過程上,產生興趣,他們沒有放棄自己,讓我對服務又燃起熱忱。現今在正向
行為協會工作,招生、行政處理與協助團體。在團體裡面,陪伴個案,紓解他們的情緒,
不要讓他們有負面的思考,幫助他們找到自己。
My name is xxx From Nantou. I graduated from National Pingtung University
and my major was in social work. There are 4 people in my family. My father
is a vocational rehabilitation counselor, and my mother is a hairdressers.
Because I like the service, so I chose social work in college. During junior
internship exposure to persons with disabilities and early intervention of
children in the service process.they did not give up, let me service has
kindled enthusiasm. today ,I work in . At work enrollment, administrative
processing and assistance organizations. In the group inside, accompanied by
case, to relieve their emotions and help them find themselves.
What is your motivation?
1. 弟弟曾經是學習障礙,壓力大而離開人世,自己賦予自己使命,要幫助類似的人
2. 長期看到父親在服務,受到極大的薰陶
3. 自己在大三實習過程上,發現喜歡身障者的純真,以及他們的努力,想要在服務過程
中,提供他們更好的。自己想要讓興趣跟職業結合,
1 . Brother is learning disabilities, pressure and passed away, I
wanted to help people like
2. long-term to see my father in the service, were greatly edified
3. I was in junior internship process, found innocent of disabled persons, as
well as their efforts. I want the services to provide them better. I want to
combine interests and career
謝謝各位
作者: Lance0616 (風翼)   2014-10-07 22:01:00
There are five people in my family.請多做點功課...你先去屏東科技大學用英文版看中文有些地方語法有點奇怪
作者: Archangel585 (真‧大天使五八五)   2014-10-07 22:32:00
自己的功課自己做…幫忙不是這樣幫低…
作者: bluecadence (Maxwell's demon)   2014-10-07 23:10:00
花點錢找人幫忙寫英文稿吧。光看英文還真的看不懂。
作者: Xa73 (Anonymous)   2014-10-08 02:09:00
市場價一字1~5元不等
作者: aaronjet (深海魚)   2014-10-08 10:05:00
光是because 後面加so,就很有問題了,
作者: kee32 (終於畢業了)   2014-10-08 11:19:00
這種英文要砍掉重練了,為你自己好。高一程度可能都不到…
作者: skyflyer03 (天空飛行者)   2014-10-08 12:29:00
原po我等等有空時~ 幫你看喔
作者: wohtp (會喵喵叫的大叔)   2014-10-08 21:44:00
我覺得連中文原文都大有問題 -_-
作者: kee32 (終於畢業了)   2014-10-08 22:23:00
幫之足以害之
作者: LaPAELLA (西班牙)   2014-10-10 19:00:00
中文...
作者: kkben (多想一步)   2014-10-11 07:29:00
我倒覺得改幾處文法結構問題 即可

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