「我很慢熟，但相處久了就會知道我的好」
我的翻譯很直白：
I slowly make friends with others,but you will know thatI am nice ,then get al
ong with me.
請問要怎麼改會比較不那麼台式英文呢？
請求各位大大幫忙，謝謝你們。

intercourse是交媾（做愛）的意思耶，害大叔我臉都紅了…

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痾......抱歉 我網路查的所以 我被誤導了 對不起 囧不好意思，我重新自己打了一遍，還請教各位大大幫忙

I don't make friends quickly, but when you get toknow me, you will realize that I am a nice person.寫得好像肥宅的心聲(爆)

it takes a while for me to get familiar with people.if you are willing to spend more time with me,you will realize how nice i am.be willing to可省略

謝謝各位大大指教QQ 感激不盡！！！