嗨 大家好!! 想要請大家幫忙看一下英文自傳~主要是放在人力銀行的履歷中!
看有沒有文法上的錯誤或者哪裡需要改進的~為了閱讀順暢有些有化名XD
My name is Cheng-Wu Jin and everyone calls me Jin. I received my bachelor
degree in Applied Foreign Language from PTT University.In college period,
I decided to serve as a Dormitory Self-Government Officer. It was a great
experience and overcame my fear of speaking in front of a big crowd. Because
I needed to help students understand dorm rules and held activities for the
dorms.
During my student years, I’ve had a few part-time jobs. For example,
I served as a waiting staff at local hotels. Working at the hotels gave me an
opportunity to practice my communication skills, especially with foreign
tourists. I also worked as a salesman at specialty shop. The way to deal with
customers and selling products are important things I have learned. For
example, keeping a smile and being passionate about the products and services
are two tips to treat your customers.
I sincerely hope that you will give me an opportunity to work in your
company. Thank you for your time and consideration.
謝謝大家的幫忙!