https://imgur.com/mq4KMfW.jpg 這是我交作業之後老師的評語， 我只看懂第一行your journal is quite good 和最後一句I’d also think ... 請求看得懂的板友指教 題外話，有時候腦袋有順利切換成英文腦就可以看草書順順看懂，有時候就完全是鬼畫符 https://i.imgur.com/1t0wMtx.jpg
I’ve noted some places where you could be more specific or go further - esp in processesI’d also link (should be ‘like’?) to see you pick up on ideas from the ___ on the readings