[請益] 英文自傳

作者: jt910203 (aa)   2016-04-25 11:14:02
Autobiography
My name is XXX I was born in Xx in xx district, Taoyuan city.
I am presently a senior in the Department of Accounting Information, xxxx . My father once worked at an
accounting firm. He is a retired bank clerk within the credit department of
bank. My mother is currently working as an accounting supervisor at the
Taiwan-funded tanneries in Zhuhai city, Guangdong province in China. Being
influenced by them, I wanted to pursue a job in the field of finance or
accounting.
My major was International Trade during senior vocational high school. After
graduating , I chose Accounting Information as my specialization in
university. During university, I did part-time jobs and an internship. The
one I liked most was interning in Mr. Hsu’s Accounting Firm. Through this
internship, I gained practical experience in accounting, such as making audit
working papers, certifications of business/income tax and certifications of
finance. All of them I can do very well. Therefore, I made up my mind to
enter the field of finance or accounting after my internship.
During senior vocational high school life, I joined the student association
as a copywriter, because I like to try different things. I also cooperated
with other elder members to finish many large-scale activities, such as
the"Welcome Party" and the "Presentation Of School Clubs". Not only did I
learn how to socialize with different people, but developed organizing skills.
My personality would be best described as peaceful and easy-going. I think
every difficult thing can be solved by rational thinking. Sometimes regarding
the thing that I care about I will steadfastly maintain my views on it, even
when the other people have other reasons for their views. This is a flaw that
I'm working on very hard to correct by constantly trying to put myself in the
other person's shoes and see things from their perspective.
I hope that I can use the knowledge and skills I have acquired in both my
coursework and practical experience to contribute to your company as a
full-time employee.
作者: mimi0254didi (餅乾)   2016-04-25 11:19:00
born 拿掉 沒人想知道你出生在哪the one i liked "the" most 建議這句改寫All of them I can do very well 多餘 或改寫I like the challenge of trying different thingsnot only did i 我會用 i have learnedMy personalities先看到這 累了=_= 請其他版友接續
作者: viwocm (Neo)   2016-04-25 13:57:00
看到介紹爸媽工作有點傻眼
作者: kaifrankwind (大師兄)   2016-04-25 14:06:00
找外商的話還是參考一些cover letter的範本吧
作者: lilyhu (簡潔俐落)   2016-04-25 22:15:00
老問題,簡單句太多,複雜句有組織內容的功能,更能將資訊以有邏輯的方式來呈現,而且句子結構需要變化更能吸引閱讀

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