有個老外說
He went down to the bar , sat down , and ordered a drink .
我是覺得應該改成 , sitting down , and ordering a drink .
請問我這樣改可以嗎?
如果是He went down to the bar, and sat down.你可以改成He went down to the bar, sitting down.這樣的改法還蠻常見,用分詞構句表連續動作。不過and連接三個片語,要改成分詞構句的話,看起來會很奇怪,因為and是連接詞,無法連接詞性不同的單字、片語或子句