[請益] 英文自我介紹 請求指導修正

作者: markinglon (哇)   2017-11-08 03:58:28
Hello everyone, My name is XXX. I currently serve in XXX.
I joined XXX in 2010, and I have been with the company for around
8 years. During the first 2 and a half years, I worked in XXX . I was
in charge of import and export business at that time. Although I only stayed
for a short time in XXX, I still have a deep emotion to this place.
And I also made a lot of good friends here. After that, I transferred to
XXX. Compared to XXX, XXX is a quiet big unit. There are about 100 staffs in
this place. You need to spend much time then you may get to know all colleges.
What I am doing here is investing for XXX. This work is challenging, but I
learned a lot from this job, including not only expertise but also stress
management.
英文不是很好,拜託好心人能否幫我看看哪裡需要改正
非常感謝!!

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