作者:
komonkey (Komonkey)
2022-03-30 20:24:49今天回覆了一個英文phone interview邀請,但事後感覺自己第一句好像寫錯了,想起板
上高手替我解惑。
(有些字因為排版跑掉,抱歉)
我的回應如下:
Hello Jimmy,
Thank you and Manager Lin for giving me this opportunity to interview, and I
will be available on 3/31(Thur.) 17:30-18:30.
Please arrange this interview for me, thank you.
Warm regards
[My Name]
問題:我第一句是不是不應該這樣寫,或是giving應該換成lettering 或offering ?
懇請各位幫忙解惑
作者:
Alphaplus (do me a favor)
2022-03-31 16:59:00先不說文法,因為你也不是應徵英文老師或翻譯。第一段我覺得表達上沒有問題,只是如果是我會寫成available on Wednesday, March 31, 17:30-18:30.但第二段的please就有點強制對方了I'm looking forward to your reply. Thank you.這樣就好,第一段已經表明你的時間,第二段有表明自己期待,這樣就可以了
Regards後面也加個逗號吧我的話會寫Thank you for the response, I’m available on 日期/月份 between 時間. Please let me know if you would like me to provide more details.Thank you. Regards, 你的名字