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原文
被保險人xxx進口影印機設備計5品項 (11 CRATES / 31 CTNS) 裝載於櫃號
NO. 5553220/40’內，於APR.29.2012, yyy人員拆櫃進倉發現其中8 CRATES
外箱破損
翻譯
The insured, xxx, had imported photocopiers and equipment contained
a total of 5 items packed in 11 crates of 31 cartons, loaded in a 40-feet
container, NO.5553220. On April 29, 2012, as soon as storage personnel
discharged the goods from the containers into warehouse, storage personnel
discovered that outer boxs of 8 crafts had been damaged.