[請益] 請問文法是否有誤呢?

作者: loveuk (~歲月靜好~現世安穩~)   2014-10-03 15:31:37
打了2個問題,
不知文法或內容是否怪怪的(文不對題之類),
就拜託大家幫我看看唷~
先謝謝拉~
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問題一:
What events in a person's life are most celebrated in your country?
回答:
Taiwanese people celebrate in many events.
When parents have a newborn baby in Taiwan, they will have a
small feast.
If getting married, couples will have a feast, too.
In my opinion, in Taiwan wedding and having a baby are most celebrated in a person's
life.
作者: Ichbinyy (我是YY)   2014-10-03 23:00:00
你打完有自己先看過一次嗎?commerate? commemorate? http://ppt.cc/626J"I mean, gifts are ..."這句也...Take myself as an example ...我覺得會比較好。第一段的結論來得有點莫名。[parents give pupils...]這邊我覺得也應該要改一下...[If getting married, newlywed couples...] newlyedcouples 是已婚了> <,前面是將要結婚> <
作者: dunchee (---)   2014-10-04 00:40:00
1. 你的回答算是文不對題。問題問的是"most celebrated",但是你的回答過於模糊/一般性。"General speaking"意思過於廣泛(和most celebrated沾不上邊)。commemorate 也無法表達"events ... most celebrated"的意思(不是mostcelebrated的events照樣可以用commemorate來表示)。之後你「隨便」舉3個例子也於事無補
作者: Ichbinyy (我是YY)   2014-10-04 00:46:00
commemorate 及物動詞... "with object"present / represent? http://ppt.cc/SBEJ
作者: MADAOTW (MADAO)   2014-10-04 01:07:00
感覺像是ibt的speaking

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