大家好,
小妹最近有一個工作面試,需要用英文自我介紹,
請問可否給我一些建議.
在此先謝謝大家^^
My name is XXX. Thank you very much for giving me a chance for an
interview.
I received a bachelor’s degree in chemistry from XXX University.
Aside from my major, I had studied Japanese in Waseda Japanese language
school and received a certificate of The Japanese Language Proficiency Test
Level 2.
I worked at family member’s company as an accounting assistant for one year.
Then I was employed in researching, calming and resolving client conflicts as a
customer service specialist and recommending, selecting and helping locate
merchandise based on customer needs and desire as a sales assistant for Merck
Ltd., Taiwan for eight momthes.
I possess strong language, communication and problem solving skills. Also I am
proactive and ready to learn anything needed.
I believe that my skills and experiences make me an excellent candidate for this
position.
Thank your for your time and attention. I welcome any questions or comments
you might have.

現在的伸手牌真的愈來愈多了…

不好意思,請問Ar大伸手牌是指...?

沒事沒事…我以為這裡是許願池別介意^^||

寫得不錯。

Then那一整句 後半部(and rec...months)要不要獨立寫成一句? 並且先講職稱名sales assistant再說工作內容 我是感覺原本寫法念起來太長太平(當然我不是你

你是要用講的 而不是寫作文給面試官看 我覺得用短句好正在想as先寫 就看到k有回了 推kai我覺得一直重複用三個詞(A, B & C)有點煩躁..(個人偏見另內容嫌少 可能就兩分鐘吧... 多加點各方面介紹吧

謝謝Kai大和Buch大的建議,我把customer service 和sales assistant分兩句,其實我也覺得都用A,B&C很乏味我把sales assistant放前面,後面接的句子改用not onlybut also的句型. 人事說只要簡單的自我介紹就好,所以我想長度1~2分鐘應該ok,真的非常感謝大家給我的建議^^