以下是論文摘要的其中一句
前幾天我的英文摘要被口試委員說翻的怪怪的 請我再修改
而我實在也搞不懂哪裡有問題
因此想請問大家看看 究竟是哪裡出了問題 謝謝!
中文原文：
人是組織的核心，因此掌握優秀員工是強化企業競爭力的重要關鍵。
英文翻譯：
As organizational members form the core of an organization,
having outstanding employees is the key to enhancing a company’s
competitiveness.

我覺得問題是冗贅。可能可改為As the core of an organization lies in its members, outstanding employees arekey to a company’s competitiveness.

Human resource is the core of an organisation, andhaving an exceptional workforce is the key to...OR therefore the key to enhancing the business'competitiveness is to secure an exceptional workfor

樓上workforce用得好！

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