[請益] 轉職自傳求批

作者: joyca (joyca)   2016-07-04 04:34:01
Name
Cell:XXXX-XXX-XXX。Email: XXXXXXXXX@gmail.com
EDUCATION
-XX University
-Bachelor of Aerospace Engineering 2011/Jun
SKILLS
-Good experience in product design(plastic)
-Catia V6-3D Modeling (Solid, Surfacing, Assembly), 2D Drawing
-Can work on Catia V6, Auto CAD, familiar with Pro-E, Solid works & Ansys
-Design & Engineering problem discuss & solving with customer & related units
STRENGTH AND ABILITES
-3-year experience in product design
-Development & Mass Production phase issue solving (design change)
-Concept development & validation(feasibility check是否較好?)
-Thorough knowledge in Product Design (mold, assembly, performance,regulation,
feasibility check)
-Good skill and speed in 3D Modeling & 2D Drawings
-Prepare the engineering product drawings with tolerance, spec. , assembly
guidance, secondary processing etc.
-OO & ## experienced(In XX project)
(OO & ## 在 XX專案中有過實作經驗,但仍不熟悉,不知是否可以如此描述)
WORK EXPERINECE
Company Name :XX Industrial 2012/Oct ~ 2015/Oct
Designation :Design engineer
Company Profile:XX product manufacturer, OEM Domestic market share over XX%.
Oversea Customer Include XX,XX,XX,XX etc.
Project Undertaken:
(專案經歷分為三項)
Independent design (Major design):
(主要想強調獨立設計,是否有其他較好的描述方式)
-型號-種別
Collaborative Design:
(協同設計,協助設計)
-型號-種類
Development & Mass Production phase:
(開發&量產階段)
-型號-種類
International Work Experience:
XX onsite design - USA,Michigan 2015/May ~ 2015/Jul
XX OO文件 signed - China,Shanghai 2014/Jun
另外如在國內與國外客戶以視訊方式協助,是否可列在此項,有無較好的描述方式
以上,再麻煩各位版友們的協助了,感謝!
作者: allenh0728 (allen)   2016-07-04 15:26:00
有部分有問題 但是這是簡歷 不是自傳 你的skills那邊可以全部刪掉然後換到你 experience的地方 這樣有 context其他看起來有問題的地方不確定是不是錯因為跟你不同科系上面說錯 是 strength and ability不是 skills
作者: JamesHsuan (詹姆士瑄)   2016-07-05 04:42:00
這不是自傳 是履歷要改的地方太多了,建議先參考國外的履歷改履歷多用動詞為開頭 你很多句子都只是把一堆名詞寫出根本不是句子
作者: gentianpan   2016-07-05 21:34:00
精簡到連冠詞都沒了,不用批啦。專業履歷重精簡,關鍵字要被資料庫工具篩到,理工的,科技都走精簡風。

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